Nov 30, 2007 12:42
16 yrs ago
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English term
business regions
English
Marketing
Manufacturing
I don't understand what "business regions" means in this context - also, what does the word "which" refer to? The products or the exhibition??
Several new products and systems will be shown at the [international exhibition], which [company name] considers to be among its most important and influential business regions. These include [a description of the products and systems]...
Thanks!
Several new products and systems will be shown at the [international exhibition], which [company name] considers to be among its most important and influential business regions. These include [a description of the products and systems]...
Thanks!
Responses
| 3 +1 | geographical areas (for its business) |
Woodstock (X)
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| 3 +3 | areas of activity |
Adele Oliveri
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| 3 | the regions where this company conducts business |
Bernhard Sulzer
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geographical areas (for its business)
If this is the original text written by a native English speaker, then "region" can really only mean a geographical area. If this is a translated text, then it could feasibly mean business field or area, but that is only speculation.
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Note added at 2 days22 hrs (2007-12-03 11:29:52 GMT) Post-grading
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I have re-read the passage and the answers, and again concluded it (the sentence) is so poorly written and ambiguous that it is hard to believe it was written by a native speaker. As a native speaker myself (the only one on this page, it would seem), I repeat that if that is the case, "region" can mean nothing else but geographical location, and the use of "influential" does not suggest "which" refers to products and systems. A region or an exhibition could - theoretically- be influential, but not product/systems in any context I know. In a case like this I would definitely go to the source and clarify the meaning, as Bernhard points out. I re-visited this entry without looking at his added notes, so I added this paragraph completely independently of what he wrote until just prior to hitting the "post" button. Then I read his notes, and we seem to be in complete agreement.
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Note added at 2 days22 hrs (2007-12-03 11:29:52 GMT) Post-grading
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I have re-read the passage and the answers, and again concluded it (the sentence) is so poorly written and ambiguous that it is hard to believe it was written by a native speaker. As a native speaker myself (the only one on this page, it would seem), I repeat that if that is the case, "region" can mean nothing else but geographical location, and the use of "influential" does not suggest "which" refers to products and systems. A region or an exhibition could - theoretically- be influential, but not product/systems in any context I know. In a case like this I would definitely go to the source and clarify the meaning, as Bernhard points out. I re-visited this entry without looking at his added notes, so I added this paragraph completely independently of what he wrote until just prior to hitting the "post" button. Then I read his notes, and we seem to be in complete agreement.
Note from asker:
| As far as I know it's been written by a native speaker. |
Peer comment(s):
| agree |
Bernhard Sulzer
: agree with your interpretation of "region"; see also my entry. :-)
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Thank you very much, Woodstock!"
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7 mins
Adele Oliveri
Italy
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areas of activity
the products and systems shown at the exhibition are the firm's most important areas of activity.
Note from asker:
| Thank you Adele, as you see, the sentence was very misunderstandable, so it's not your fault!! |
Peer comment(s):
| agree |
V_Nedkov
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thank you V.!
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| agree |
ARTES
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thank you ARTES!
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Bernhard Sulzer
: just a thought: I have a hard time understanding products/systems as "areas." Do you mean "the showing of these products/systems" is an important area of activity? But then "business region" would really sound odd.
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Thanks for your comment. I interpret the sentence to mean that "the production of those products and systems" is a very important area of business for the firm. I might be completely wrong, off course ;-)
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| agree |
orientalhorizon
: they are trying to refering to "business fields", or "business scope".
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thank you orientalhorizon! :-)
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Bernhard Sulzer
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the regions where this company conducts business
I read it as the regions (in the geographical sense) where this company conducts business/sells its products.
The "which" then refers to "[international exhibition]". So, in that sense this place/region is one of the most important (in what sense important exactly I am not sure of, maybe as in "must do business there") and influential (where they can have a lot of impact) with their products.
It does sound odd, the whole thing. The "its" does not make it any easier. Replace it with "the" and I would say the region/place of the exhibition is really important and influential in terms of "what happens there has a huge effect on what happens everywhere else." "Therefore we can't ignore it."
On the other hand, if "areas/sectors" is substituted for regions, the "its" makes sense because then the "which" could refer to the products. But then products and systems become areas/sectors and the sentence is odd again. (IMO).
I agree with Woodstock's comments. But given your info (native speaker text), only the "spatial" meaning makes sense (to me anyway, but my native language is German).
Unless the term comes from a place where "region" is indeed used, not in the spatial sense, but as "business field/sector." (maybe somewhere in Germany used by an English native speaker who has been there too long? I don't really think so.)
Can you check with the client?
:-)
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Note added at 12 hrs (2007-12-01 00:59:00 GMT)
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make that "geographical" regions where this company conducts business
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Note added at 12 hrs (2007-12-01 01:07:51 GMT)
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When I say "I read it as the regions (in the geographical sense) where this company conducts business/sells its products" I guess it could also be "where this company, among other things, "promotes" its products, as at the exhibition.
One could even try to relate the "which" to the whole sentence before, but that this "activity of introducing products at the exhibition" becomes a "region" again, and only "area" would fit here.
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Note added at 12 hrs (2007-12-01 01:13:43 GMT)
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typo corr. last sentence: ...but *then* this "activity of introducing...."...
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Note added at 3 days44 mins (2007-12-03 13:27:44 GMT) Post-grading
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Thank you for your feedback, Nesrin. And yes, of course, Woodstock deserves the points.
Cheers!
Note from asker:
| Thank you very much Bernhard, for your very useful explanation. I hope it's alright with you that I give the points to Woodstock, as he was the first to suggest "region". :-) |
| I mean "the first to suggest GEOGRAPHICAL region"! |
Discussion
I had to add some words to make it make sense: "...products will be shown at the [exhibition] IN [COUNTRY], AS [company] considers [THE MIDDLE EAST] to be among its most important business regions".