Glossary entry

English term or phrase:

gaze to all directions

English answer:

looked all around

Added to glossary by Heather Shaw
Jul 31, 2008 19:33
15 yrs ago
English term

gaze to all directions

English Art/Literary Poetry & Literature
PROOFREADING
HE GAZE TO ALL DIRECTIONS AND GAVE YES / NO ANSWERS...

i WOULD SAY IN ALL DIRECTIONS

Suggestions welcome. Many thanks.
Change log

Aug 1, 2008 07:50: Steffen Walter changed "Term asked" from "GAZE TO ALL DIRECTIONS" to "gaze to all directions" , "Field" from "Other" to "Art/Literary"

Aug 14, 2008 07:34: Heather Shaw Created KOG entry

Responses

+9
6 mins
Selected

looked all around

I think this sounds more natural
Peer comment(s):

agree Carol Gullidge : looked/stared all around him
27 mins
thanks :)
agree juvera : Gazing in all directions implies to have eyes all around... ;-)
42 mins
thanks :)
agree Catherine Winzer : I agree that this sounds more natural (agree with Juvera)
3 hrs
thanks :)
agree Tony M
3 hrs
thanks :)
agree Phong Le
5 hrs
thanks :)
agree Carla_am
8 hrs
thanks :)
agree Patricia Townshend (X)
11 hrs
thanks :)
neutral David Moore (X) : If this were not proofreading, perhaps; but personally, I find it acceptable anyway.
12 hrs
thanks :)
agree conejo
4 days
thanks :)
agree Ventnai
4 days
thanks :)
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Selected automatically based on peer agreement."
+8
6 mins

gazed in all directions

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Peer comment(s):

agree Demi Ebrite
33 mins
Thanks!
agree Liam Hamilton : there seems to be a conflict of tenses, so "gazed"looks correct
39 mins
Thanks!
agree Vicky Nash
1 hr
Thanks!
agree KathyPro : Yes - "gazed" to agree with "gave"
1 hr
Thanks!
agree Will Matter
1 hr
Thanks!
agree Phong Le
5 hrs
Thanks!
agree David Moore (X)
12 hrs
Thanks!
agree conejo
4 days
Thanks!
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+5
6 mins

IN all directions, of course

But other options may work better, such as: "he looked about/around him"
Peer comment(s):

agree NancyLynn : yes and yes, absolutely; and I would add that there is a typo in He gaze
12 mins
Thank you, NancyLynn.
agree Jack Doughty
25 mins
Thank you, Jack.
agree Demi Ebrite : Agree, with added 'ed' to 'gaze'
33 mins
Thank you, debrite.
agree Will Matter
1 hr
Thank you, Will.
agree Gert Sass (M.A.) : (or into ...?)/Interesting: Imagining myself as an English teacher, I would teach "into". (Just interested in your native speaker opinion, to make sure)
2 hrs
Thank you, Gert, though I'd stick with 'in' here.
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