German to English Marketing

Hi all,

this may be a bit of an "unusual" request, but I really need to revise myself and get some outside feedback.

So this is a deal, below I provide the source text and two possible translations, I'd really appreciate if you folks could just let me know which one of the two you would prefer. Now don't worry, I am not planning on rubbing this under somebody's nose, proof somebody wrong, or anything alike. I am just asking myself these days if I am still in touch with the world beyond my monitor enough to produce a good style, so, here it is:

Source:
Klein, platzsparend und schön anzusehen ist der XXX TFT 15 im edlen Alu-Design. Mit einem Kontrastverhältnis von 400:1 und einer Reaktionszeit von 16 Millisekunden verwöhnt dieses schmale Leichtgewicht nicht nur Ihre Augen - die eingebauten Lautsprecher sorgen gleichzeitig für gute Unterhaltung. Wer es futuristisch mag, montiert den XXX TFT einfach und bequem an der Wand.

Translation option 1:
Small, space saving, and an exclusive aluminium design - the XXX TFT 15.
At a contrast ratio of 400:1 and only 16 milliseconds reaction delay time this slim
lightweight does not only please your eyes - the integrated speakers will also adulate
your ears! And those who like it futuristic simply mount it to their walls.

Translation option 2:
Small, space saving, and an exclusive aluminium design - the XXX TFT 15. At a contrast ratio of 400:1 and only 16 milliseconds reaction delay time this slim lightweight device is not only pleasing to the beholder but the integrated speakers will entertain you! If your taste is futuristic, simply mount it on the walls.

Again, I am not trying to proof someone wrong or anything, I am merely trying to figure out if my style needs revision.

Thank you all in advance
T.