Nick Taylor Nov 4, 2013:

OK... ...let's not get snippy! We all know that translators can be under a lot of pressure and this is one place where they can help each other out. I am quite sure you are NOT a freeloader as you answer questions too :-O. Keep up the good work :-)

Andrea Parham (asker) Nov 3, 2013:

thanks, for your advice, but, I'll use the space to make considerations. First of all, you guys do not know the kind of work and the conditions I am working on. To send me messages saying i have the nerve to use translators because I've posted more than 10 words and ask to pass on the entire work just make me disconsider much more this kind of translator. Thanks to the ones who have tried to help and the ones, who thought it was too much but use their time to work (or do something even better!) than post rude comments. This is not for you, Georgia, who have taken the time to give advice to a less experienced coleague. Thanks a lot!

Georgia Morg (X) Nov 3, 2013:

Blood I saw your previous wording of this question for which you fell foul of the 10 word rule. The problem is that, by omitting, the word "blood" we now have false collocations. Katarina was not to know that the puddle should be a pool because she does not know you are talking about blood. Maybe, therefore, it would have been better, as I suggested at the time, to break the sentence into several parts, rather than omitting important nouns!