Glossary entry

English term or phrase:

my cherries

French translation:

mes anges / mésanges

    The asker opted for community grading. The question was closed on 2017-01-29 09:54:07 based on peer agreement (or, if there were too few peer comments, asker preference.)
Jan 25, 2017 18:01
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English term

my cherries

English to French Art/Literary Poetry & Literature novel
Sentence: The old lady spoke to her birds. "Sleep tight, mes chéries, she would say, which meant : "good night my cherries".

This is what a five-year old child hears.

How would one translate this? Any ideas anyone?

Keep "mes chéries" or use "my darlings" or "sweeties" or another term or endearment? Dormez bien, my darlings, ce qui voulait dire ???

Totally stuck.

Thank you for your suggestions.
Proposed translations (French)
4 +7 mes anges / mésanges
4 mes chéris
4 mes chouchous

Discussion

Isabelle Cluzel Jan 25, 2017:
everything but a note, please! :)
Fanny Villuendas Jan 25, 2017:
I like your suggestion Tony, but personaly I Think I would keep "mes chéries" and add a note explaining what the Child understand; it's so sweet :)
Tony M Jan 25, 2017:
@ Asker The cross-language pun will never work in FR, why not look for something else, for example "my sweeties", and the little boy thought she meant 'bonbons'

Proposed translations

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mes anges / mésanges

Pourquoi pas délaisser le registre "gourmand" et adopter un tout autre registre dans lequel vous pourriez reproduire le jeu de mots ?

Je pense à "Dormez-bien, mes anges", et l'enfant comprend, "mésanges".
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agree Fanny Villuendas
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Merci Fanny :)
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Oui, merci beaucoup Lucy, je suis tout à fait d'accord. C'est parfait."
41 mins

mes chéris

Use the masculine in French - birds are masculine ans so are the famous Ferrero chocolates.

Et l'enfant comprend "mes mon chéris" like the chocolates
https://www.ferrero.fr/mon-cheri
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1 hr

mes chouchous

"chéri", "darlings" and "sweeties", ça fait un peut trop adulte et personnalisé.
'chouchous' plus adapté au ton et registre du contexte ("spoke to her birds")
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