French term
Multilingual academic lawyer
Native in: English (Variant: Scottish) 
, Italian
Works in: Italian to English, German to English, French to English, and 3 more.
est bien le sien puis communique
"A cette fin, le client confirme qu'il est le titulaire de la carte bancaire à débiter et que le nom figurant sur cette carte bancaire est bien le sien puis communique dans un environnement sécurisé sur le site de notre partenaire de paiement, le numéro à seize chiffres et la date d'expiration figurant au recto de sa carte bancaire, ainsi que les numéros du cryptogramme visuel figurant au verso de sa carte bancaire."
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Kristin Kamm
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Proposed translations
is indeed his. Then...
...the client confirms that he is the holder of the bank card to be debited and that the name thereon is indeed his. Then, through a secure environment on our payment partner's site, he provides the 16-digit number and expiration date that appear on the front of his bank card as well as...
Discussion
So would you agree that it would perhaps be clearer, and not change the meaning, to say: "puis qu'il communiquera" instead of "puis communique"?
que le nom figurant sur cette carte bancaire est bien le sien, puis communique (dans un environnement sécurisé sur le site de notre partenaire de paiement) le numéro à seize chiffres et la date d'expiration figurant au recto de sa carte bancaire, ainsi que les numéros du cryptogramme visuel figurant au verso de sa carte bancaire."
"que le nom figurant sur cette carte bancaire est bien le sien / puis communique", i.e. "A cette fin, le client confirme ... puis communique". There should have been a comma after "sein".