Glossary entry (derived from question below)
Spanish term or phrase:
expresiones que permite su compromiso
English translation:
ways that allow them to express their commitment
Added to glossary by
Lydianette Soza
Nov 17, 2014 14:56
9 yrs ago
Spanish term
Belize
Works in: English to Spanish, Spanish to English
expresiones que permite su compromiso
Non-PRO
Spanish to English
Other
International Org/Dev/Coop
youth participation
Estimados a continuación les comparto un extracto de un documento que estoy traduciendo.
Mi duda aquí radica en la expresión 'expresiones que permite su compromiso' como detallo a continuación:
Se ha logrado la promoción y participación de jóvenes organizados en las diferentes estructuras organizativas, con la integración de los mismos en las expresiones que permite su compromiso en realizar procesos de gestión y presentar propuestas que permita un bienestar integral en l@s niñ@s, en términos de integración y cambio.
Estoy consciente que el original falla un poco en la redacción. A continuanción mi traducción del texto:
[Both] promotion and participation of youth organised in different organisational structures has been achieved through their integration to **expressions which enable/alow their commitment** in the carrying out of actions and submission of proposals which enable a comprehensive well-being for children in terms of integration and change.
Sugerencia
Mi duda aquí radica en la expresión 'expresiones que permite su compromiso' como detallo a continuación:
Se ha logrado la promoción y participación de jóvenes organizados en las diferentes estructuras organizativas, con la integración de los mismos en las expresiones que permite su compromiso en realizar procesos de gestión y presentar propuestas que permita un bienestar integral en l@s niñ@s, en términos de integración y cambio.
Estoy consciente que el original falla un poco en la redacción. A continuanción mi traducción del texto:
[Both] promotion and participation of youth organised in different organisational structures has been achieved through their integration to **expressions which enable/alow their commitment** in the carrying out of actions and submission of proposals which enable a comprehensive well-being for children in terms of integration and change.
Sugerencia
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| 4 +1 | ways that allow them to express their commitment |
justin taylor
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justin taylor
United States
United States
Native in English
Specializes in field
United States
quality is paramount
Native in: English (Variant: US)
Works in: Spanish to English, Portuguese to English
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ways that allow them to express their commitment
Hi Lydianette. This may sound like a simplification of the Spanish, but I think it reads smoother in English, which is why I have said "ways". The whole thing could be something like "[Both] promotion and participation of youth organised in different organisational structures has been achieved by integrating them in ways that allow them to express their commitment to carrying out actions and submitting proposals..." I hope this helps!
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David Hollywood
: didn't see yours and will withdraw mine but would still suggest "activities"
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Thanks, David!
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Both promotion and participation of youth grouped in different organised structures have been achieved through their integration to expressions enabling them to display their commitment in the carrying out of actions and submission of proposals towards a holistic well-being for ....
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