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Jul 13, 2011 22:55
12 yrs ago
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Spanish term

sobre los deberes y derechos comunes en relación con

Spanish to English Law/Patents Real Estate
Sigo con la revisión de la traducción del contrato de cancelación - venta de hipoteca:

"...se encuentra comprendido dentro de los siguientes linderos: NORTE: Con calle xxx del Conjunto; SUR: con parcela No. xx; ESTE: Con calle zzz del Conjunto; y OESTE: con parcela No. 6. A la mencionada parcela, le corresponde un porcentaje de 2,784714% **sobre los deberes y derechos comunes en relación con** la parcela No. 6, tercera etapa, y un porcentaje de 1,037405% **sobre los deberes y derechos comunes en relación con** el Conjunto al cual pertenece."

El traductor puso: "A percentage of 2.784715 % of the common rights and duties in relation to Plot No. 6, 3rd Stage corresponds to the aforementioned plot and ...

Yo estaba considerando algo como "This plot is entitled to receive a percentage of 2.784715 % of the common rights and duties regarding Plot No. 6, Third Stage..."

Muchísimas gracias por adelantado por todas las sugerencias.
Proposed translations (English)
4 on the common rights and duties regarding / with respect to

Discussion

Yvonne Becker (asker) Jul 14, 2011:
Gracias por la aclaratoria He revisado tanto que ya no sé ni donde estoy parada
mediamatrix (X) Jul 13, 2011:
Agree with FVS It ain't broke - no need to 'fix' it.
FVS (X) Jul 13, 2011:
Not wishing to be rude but.... the translation you are revising is much better than your version. I know this stuff and I would leave it alone if I were you.// The original could be re-arranged a but but the meaning is correct.

Proposed translations

49 mins

on the common rights and duties regarding / with respect to

I like the sound of "regarding" as you suggested or "with respect to" more than 'in relation to" personally

Mike

Peer comment(s):
neutral Jennifer Levey : Hmmm... OK as far as it goes, but your answer suggests you agree with the rest of Asker's version which, I believe, contains a glaring error.
29 mins
neutral FVS (X) : No. "On" is wrong and misleading and completely destroys the sense here.
7 hrs
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