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Imagine dining in a European capital where you do not know the local language. The waiter speaks little English, but by hook or by crook you manage to order something on the menu that you recognise, eat and pay for. Now picture instead that, after a hike goes wrong, you emerge, starving, in an Amazonian village. The people there have no idea what to make of you. You mime chewing sounds, which they mistake for your primitive tongue. When you raise your hands to signify surrender, they think you are launching an attack.

Communicating without a shared context is hard. For example, radioactive sites must be left undisturbed for tens of thousands of years; yet, given that the English of just 1,000 years ago is now unintelligible to most of its modern speakers, agencies have struggled to create warnings to accompany nuclear waste. Committees responsible for doing so have come up with everything from towering concrete spikes, to Edvard Munch’s “The Scream”, to plants genetically modified to turn an alarming blue. None is guaranteed to be future-proof.

Some of the same people who worked on these waste-site messages have also been part of an even bigger challenge: communicating with extraterrestrial life. This is the subject of “Extraterrestrial Languages”, a new book by Daniel Oberhaus, a journalist at Wired.

Nothing is known about how extraterrestrials might take in information. A pair of plaques sent in the early 1970s with Pioneer 10 and 11, two spacecraft, show nude human beings and a rough map to find Earth—rudimentary stuff, but even that assumes aliens can see. Since such craft have no more than an infinitesimal chance of being found, radio broadcasts from Earth, travelling at the speed of light, are more likely to make contact. But just as a terrestrial radio must be tuned to the right frequency, so must the interstellar kind. How would aliens happen upon the correct one? The Pioneer plaque gives a hint in the form of a basic diagram of a hydrogen atom, the magnetic polarity of which flips at regular intervals, with a frequency of 1,420MHz. Since hydrogen is the most abundant element in the universe, the hope is that this sketch might act as a sort of telephone number.

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Entry #31364 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Kenyan
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Voting points1st2nd3rd
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Mwandazi anaongea kiingereza kiduchu tu,
Good term selection
Good word ​selection
Rabiya Abubakar
matamshi ya kishamba tu ya ulimi wako
Flows well
perfect re​ndition
Radhya Ahmed
Ni vigumu sana kuwasiliana bila ya kuwa na muktadha unaolandana
Flows well
Well rende​red senten​ce
Rabiya Abubakar
Entry #31793 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Tanzanian
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203 x43 x22 x1
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Bamba mbili
Good term selection
George Mwidima Kihanda
Entry #31780 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
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173 x41 x23 x1
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Entry #31775 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
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91 x42 x21 x1
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Pata picha upo kwenye mgahawa mmojawapo huko Ulaya ambapo hujui lugha yao ya asili
Flows well
But a full​ stop shou​ld be plac​ed immedia​tely at th​e end. No ​space
George Mwidima Kihanda