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Imagine dining in a European capital where you do not know the local language. The waiter speaks little English, but by hook or by crook you manage to order something on the menu that you recognise, eat and pay for. Now picture instead that, after a hike goes wrong, you emerge, starving, in an Amazonian village. The people there have no idea what to make of you. You mime chewing sounds, which they mistake for your primitive tongue. When you raise your hands to signify surrender, they think you are launching an attack.

Communicating without a shared context is hard. For example, radioactive sites must be left undisturbed for tens of thousands of years; yet, given that the English of just 1,000 years ago is now unintelligible to most of its modern speakers, agencies have struggled to create warnings to accompany nuclear waste. Committees responsible for doing so have come up with everything from towering concrete spikes, to Edvard Munch’s “The Scream”, to plants genetically modified to turn an alarming blue. None is guaranteed to be future-proof.

Some of the same people who worked on these waste-site messages have also been part of an even bigger challenge: communicating with extraterrestrial life. This is the subject of “Extraterrestrial Languages”, a new book by Daniel Oberhaus, a journalist at Wired.

Nothing is known about how extraterrestrials might take in information. A pair of plaques sent in the early 1970s with Pioneer 10 and 11, two spacecraft, show nude human beings and a rough map to find Earth—rudimentary stuff, but even that assumes aliens can see. Since such craft have no more than an infinitesimal chance of being found, radio broadcasts from Earth, travelling at the speed of light, are more likely to make contact. But just as a terrestrial radio must be tuned to the right frequency, so must the interstellar kind. How would aliens happen upon the correct one? The Pioneer plaque gives a hint in the form of a basic diagram of a hydrogen atom, the magnetic polarity of which flips at regular intervals, with a frequency of 1,420MHz. Since hydrogen is the most abundant element in the universe, the hope is that this sketch might act as a sort of telephone number.

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Entry #31276 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
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在亚马逊河流域的一个村子里
Flows well
Dr Umesh Gupta
涉足
Good term selection
Jinchang Yu
但其中却没有一种能够保证经得起时间的考验。
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Hoi Yin Tang
一无所知
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Dr Umesh Gupta
天体图
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Mina Chen
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试想在某欧洲之都用餐,你不懂当地语言,而服务员几乎不会英语,你连比带划,点了两样认识的食
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Avy Jiang
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Hoi Yin Tang
Hoi Yin Tang
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你還是成功點菜吃飽結賬
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Jiong GUO
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Zi Tian Phang
Zi Tian Phang
Singapore
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出了差错
Flows well
是出了差错的意思,而​不一定是走错路。比如​由于天气原因你走不到​预定目的地,也叫 G​o wrong,这时​未必走错路。
Jiong GUO
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不知道该拿你如何是好
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Mina Chen
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但你使出浑身解数
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Jiong GUO
想像另一个场景
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Jiong GUO
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但都假设外星人有视觉能力
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Jiong GUO
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餐毕付款
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Mina Chen
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没有同样的语境,沟通会很难。
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Eric Lee
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但没有一种方法可以保证后人可以理解。
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Mina Chen
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但没有任何一种方法可以保证在未来起到警示之效。
Flows well
Mina Chen
由于此类飞行器被发现的几率微乎其微,相比之下,从地球发出的无线电广播可以光速传播,与外星生命取得联系的几率要大得多。
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Jiong GUO
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Sophie Ao
Sophie Ao
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欧洲之都
Good term selection
原文“capital​”,并非特批首都,也​可指都市,大可不必翻​译为“欧洲国家首都”​。
Eric Lee
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欧洲之都
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the steel ​capital of​ the count​ry; a fash​ion capita​l——(某种工业、行​业、活动等集中或出名​的)重要都市——致楼​上 :-)PS:“欧​洲之都”、“亚洲之都​”之类表述简练而贴切​,更符合中文习惯
Eric Lee
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语境不同,难以沟通,此非妄言。以辐射场为例,万年不可触之。然,语言演变,未及千年,面目全非,及至万年,无人解惑
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Eric Lee
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浩瀚宇宙,氢含量之巨,无出其右,以其频率为信,可待异域「来电」矣。
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Eric Lee
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现在,想象另一个情景:你在徒步旅行时迷失了方向,来到了亚马逊丛林里的一座村庄,饥肠辘辘。
Flows well
Mina Chen
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